Wont Scar

HAIKU

Fashioning a heart?
Better use elastic,
It will not scar, promise.


8 responses to “Wont Scar”

  1. Haikus fascinate me!!! I want to learn …you and wanjiku have some teaching to do ! I find so much beauty in haikus

    1. Wanjeri

      I agree! Haikus are lovely its like compressed magic! hehehe well this is the second haiku I have ever written i’m not a pro!!! But from the research I did there are two forms of haikus…the traditional 3 lines with 5 syllable, 7 syllable, 5 syllable and the Free form where the syllable count is longer or shorter to suit the writer’s fancy.

      As I count the syllables in this one I realize it is 5,6,7! Clearly this is not a traditional haiku ;/

  2. THAT IS VERY WITTY!!

    this is to prove nothing is wrong with my caps

    1. Wanjeri

      HAHAHAHA OK BARU! Thanks for stopping by ๐Ÿ™‚

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  4. short n sweet haiku…enough inspiration 2me

    1. Wanjeri

      Glad to hear that ๐Ÿ™‚ thanks for stopping by!

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